| Dernières réponses | |  Jill and Elincia are just awesome !!! 
Sinon je commence dans le Grand Art du sprite ^^ alors soyez indulgents s'il vous plait, voila mes premiers :
Voila mon tout premier :
Ensuite une sorte de méchant Eliwood :
et enfin un lord quelconque :
Voila dites moi ce que vous en penser et surtout dites moi quoi faire pour améliorer tout ça svp.
(En esperant que ce topic n'est pas mort alors que c'est pour lui que je me suis inscrit  )
Edité le 09-07-2010 à 16:25:42 par Shunwoo
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| | I Want to say... Awesome! O_o
For Elincia, I prefer the 2nd sprite, because she has better color than the other; She is a noble, so she had a clear skin.
I think the Lachesis sprite can be better with a modification of the mouth. |
| | Updates on Lachesis, Jill and Elincia
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| | Nice, Elincia and Jill. :)
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Ça me fait penser qu'il faudra que je pense à faire les corrections sur mon dernier mug d'ailleurs et que je continue le 3ème que j'avais vaguement entamé. D:
Edité le 19-11-2009 à 00:57:25 par Eliwood
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| | I live in australia so i speak english as my first language, french i learnt from school and what i dont know i either try not to use or translate and apply with the best of my knowledge, i also speak some macedonian  btw i ramble on alot
Thanks for the cnc Marthur it's gotten to the point that ppl think the sprites are done so cnc stops, so i will work on the mentioned issues, lachesis still bothers me after that last edit so i will try somethign else with her face
anyone on feu in particular? i have a rough idea about who your speaking but dont know for sure as i want on the forum when you were
Fixed Jill's hair to look better inside the hack box limit
Made elincia
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| | Vampire Elf a écrit :
Many of you here english speaking?
Font beaucoup d'entre vous parlez anglais?
J'ai essaye de resoudre tous les problemes que vous avez mentionne
J'ai aussi plus, bien que Le'en et Tiltyu sont les modifications de sprites Miss Tama, comme je l'ai version finale, de leur critique serait une bonne chose
Jill n'est pas pour FE4 mais comme un autre a mis en place un i sprite Jill veulent attendre avant de l'afficher sur mes forums habituels |
Yes. You'll find several members who can speak English here, so feel free to write in the language you feel more comfortable with.
A general comment for your face sprites: Use the outline color when drawing the left side of the faces. Vigarde/Leon/any character with long hair would be nice references for you to look at, I guess.
@Ishtor:
-His hair lacks details. Adding a bit more of shadows could help.
-The way you drew the hair just above the forehead seems a bit random IMO.
@Ethlin:
-Raise her hair a little, especially on the left side.
@Tiltyu
-Missing a brown/grey pixel on the top left part of the forehead.
On an unrelated note, I'd appreciate if the guys at FEU could stop stroking their ego and wouldn't criticize sprites that were made 4 years ago , which is silly because it was a time when the standards were quite different. At that time, custom sprites barely existed and splices were considered good when well made. |
| | Marthur a écrit :
Je ne suis pas mort, Pyro. Pas encore... |
Je n'ais jamais dit que tu l'étais 
@Vampire Elf
Tiltyu's hair seems weird near that red ornament, perhaps giving her a ponytail like in her sprite in FE4, or thickening a bit her hair in that region can fix it.
Only thing bothering me is why if you gave Lachesis blue hair, you gave Tiltyu gray eyes. Not only would blue eyes be more "natural", but it's how they are in the TCG (and in the same way, Diadora's seems more blackish than grayish in her art)
On Diadora's sprite, in the low-right corner, between her hair, there are 3 pale blue/gray pixels who should be white (if it's not supposed to be hair) or darker.
(Ishtor looks like Archer)
Jill eyes are odd, they have 2 colors... are they supposed to be red or purple?
Edité le 17-11-2009 à 10:45:25 par pyro
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| | Many of you here english speaking?
Font beaucoup d'entre vous parlez anglais?
J'ai essaye de resoudre tous les problemes que vous avez mentionne
J'ai aussi plus, bien que Le'en et Tiltyu sont les modifications de sprites Miss Tama, comme je l'ai version finale, de leur critique serait une bonne chose
Jill n'est pas pour FE4 mais comme un autre a mis en place un i sprite Jill veulent attendre avant de l'afficher sur mes forums habituels
Edité le 17-11-2009 à 05:02:47 par Vampire Elf
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| | pyro a écrit :
FE4 advance n'est-ce pas?
Sylvia à l'air un peu vieille (et son cou est un peu trop grand)
La frange d'Amid est peut être un peu trop fine.
Alvis à le visage un poil étiré.
Pour ce qui est pour l'ombrage et tout le reste, il faut attendre l'arrivée de Marthur... d'ici le prochain millénaire) |
Je ne suis pas mort, Pyro. Pas encore...
Vampire Elf a écrit :
Bonjour je souhaitais je pouvais obtenir quelques commentaires sur mes sprites de FE4
Mais il existe d'autres je suis encore en train de
merci |
@Sylvia:
-Mouth must be fixed.
Try giving her a neutral/smiling expression. Overall, I think it should be reduced by two pixels from the right.
-You might want to add a bit more shading on the right side of the face near the hair.
-Lastly, there is too much shading near her armpit.
@Fee:
-Mouth is too large. Reduce it a little bit on the right side.
-There's a transparent pixel on the neck.
-There could be more shadow on the neck as well.
@Lachesis:
-The face's outline is badly drawn. :/
-Mouth is too large on the left side.
@Amid looks alright to me.
@Alvis
- Try adding a bit more shading under his hair.
-The hair that are falling on his forehead are too bright.
@Yurius
-The mark on his forehead could be darker.
-Neck's outline is badly drawn.
-The left eye seem a bit too big.
@Yuria
-Her face seems a bit too small.
-Looks good otherwise. |
| | FE4 advance n'est-ce pas?
Sylvia à l'air un peu vieille (et son cou est un peu trop grand)
La frange d'Amid est peut être un peu trop fine.
Alvis à le visage un poil étiré.
Pour ce qui est pour l'ombrage et tout le reste, il faut attendre l'arrivée de Marthur... d'ici le prochain millénaire)
Edité le 16-11-2009 à 13:19:10 par pyro
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